Sep
2004
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My first attempt at Lesbian writing

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This is only the beginning of a really steamy lesbian love story. I will post more as I write it! i PROMISE! Oh, and thank you Kelly for making me part of the group of writers!….enjoy.

Familiar

1.

She was sitting on her barstool at her favorite watering hole enjoying her first cosmopolitan of the night. It was a Wednesday and the place was hardly populated for some odd reason. Usually Wednesdays were packed. After a few minutes of idle conversation with the resident bartender something caught her attention out of the corner of her eye. When she looked casually to the left there was the girl she so longed to get to know walking in and straight up to where she was sitting.

For a moment she felt the warm heated sensation creep up on her but she maintained her calmness and took a heavy sip from her drink. The girl whom she so longingly desired stood directly next to her and ordered a tall Southern Comfort and coke. Immediately she felt herself begin to flush and she knew she had to say something or she would definitely need to get out of there right quick. With all the strength she could muster she turned towards the girl and said “well, it sure is a slow night here isn’t it?”

As the girl took her drink and handed the bartender the money she turned and replied “yes, it is rather dead here tonight.” As she took back her change she said in a kind of clammy voice “My name is Jenna , I think I may have seen you around a few times.”

With those words being spoken she turned and said back in a shaky tone “uh, I do think you may have, I am known around these parts as Kayle” as her mouth began a sinister smile. As though it was meant to be the girl named Jenna sat down in the empty barstool next to Kayle and lit a cigarette. “so,” she said with a smoky exhale, “do you mind if we get to know each other a bit better and chat awhile?” Kayle raised her glass and took a long hard sip and said “yeah, sure I have no problem with that.” In the back of her mind however she was thinking OH YEAH!!

As the evening progressed the two women found out they actually had a lot more in common than they ever knew. They were both in their mid 30’s, both were married at one time, and they both were interested in finding a casual relationship with a woman as both had recently come out and were not interested in a long term relationship. They discussed poetry, music, favorite drinks, their ex’s, there “first” lesbian encounters and even what they both liked to eat at Buffalo Wild Wings. In a few short hours Jenna and Kayle had become very much interested in each other.

The bar was getting ready to close up for the night Kayle excused herself to the ladies room and Jenna made sure the tabs were both paid. Kayle came back to the bar and Jenna said “well, you ready to hit the road?” Without a second thought Kayle said “sure” and the two women strolled out together.

As they approached a silver Grand am Jenna said “that would be mine” and Kayle giggled and said “the Aztek next to it is mine, how cute!” The two women stopped at the rear of both cars and reached out to each other for a goodbye hug. Jenna, however, had other intentions. As Kayle began to spoon into her she turned her head and latched on with a fever and began to kiss her deeply.

As Kayle melted into Jenna’s kisses her tongue began to dance with excitement. She was running it over and under Jenna’s throbbing tongue in an awesome display of passion. She could hardly get enough of her sweet taste. The two women were lost in each other’s arms, melting in each others touch. Finally, after a few minutes Jenna broke free and looked up at Kayle. In a worried voice she finally said “I am so sorry, I shouldn’t” as Kayle cut her off and said “no, really, you should!” and began to move into her embrace again for more kisses.

The two women were lost in each other for a long while, kissing and embracing as if they were the only two around. Finally, Kayle backed off and said “can I call you tomorrow, I hate to go but I have to work so early in the morning.” Jenna responded in a frazzled tone and said “sure, let me give you my number and get yours as well.” The two women exchanged numbers and kissed once again to say goodnight. “I’ll call you after five!!” Kayle said as she hurried to her car. “I’ll be waiting!” Jenna said with a Cheshire grin. The two women got into their respected vehicles and drove off into the night both feeling a bit giddy from the adventures they just experienced.

Hello,
I feel that this piece had a lot of great compnents to it. I think you show a lot of promise, however I would advise to cut down on the word “and.”
I think this story shows true potential.
Good job!

-laguz_godin

by laguz_godin on September 22nd, 2004 at 6:48 am

Thank you so much for your encouraging words and for reading my piece. I will definately take your advice and get rid of the “and” problem!

by sappybeaver on September 23rd, 2004 at 4:23 pm

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