Comments on: My first attempt at Lesbian writing http://thelesbianlifestyle.com/2004/09/22/my-first-attempt-at-lesbian-writing/ Thu, 29 Jul 2010 22:53:40 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: sappybeaver http://thelesbianlifestyle.com/2004/09/22/my-first-attempt-at-lesbian-writing/comment-page-1/#comment-15 sappybeaver Thu, 23 Sep 2004 16:23:00 +0000 http://thelesbianlifestyle.com/?p=9#comment-15 Thank you so much for your encouraging words and for reading my piece. I will definately take your advice and get rid of the "and" problem!<div class="comment-remix-meta"><a href="#" class="replyto" onclick="replyto('15','sappybeaver'); return false;">Reply</a> - <a href="#" class="quote" onclick="quote('15','sappybeaver','Thank you so much for your encouraging words and for reading my piece. I will definately take your advice and get rid of the \"and\" problem!'); return false;">Quote</a></div> Thank you so much for your encouraging words and for reading my piece. I will definately take your advice and get rid of the “and” problem!
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]]> By: laguz_godin http://thelesbianlifestyle.com/2004/09/22/my-first-attempt-at-lesbian-writing/comment-page-1/#comment-9 laguz_godin Wed, 22 Sep 2004 06:48:00 +0000 http://thelesbianlifestyle.com/?p=9#comment-9 Hello,<br />I feel that this piece had a lot of great compnents to it. I think you show a lot of promise, however I would advise to cut down on the word "and."<br />I think this story shows true potential.<br />Good job!<br /><br />-laguz_godin<div class="comment-remix-meta"><a href="#" class="replyto" onclick="replyto('9','laguz_godin'); return false;">Reply</a> - <a href="#" class="quote" onclick="quote('9','laguz_godin','Hello,<br \/>I feel that this piece had a lot of great compnents to it. I think you show a lot of promise, however I would advise to cut down on the word \"and.\"<br \/>I think this story shows true potential.<br \/>Good job!<br \/><br \/>-laguz_godin'); return false;">Quote</a></div> Hello,
I feel that this piece had a lot of great compnents to it. I think you show a lot of promise, however I would advise to cut down on the word “and.”
I think this story shows true potential.
Good job!

-laguz_godin

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