2008
A bit of me
Hello to all! I’m new here but I love to write so I’m VERY excited to get started. I’m currently working on a book and wanted to share a little bit of it with all of you. I promise this will be my only post about the book, but I can’t promise you won’t want to read more. 
“I just needed her to give me a chance. One fucking chance, one fucking day. That’s all.”
Kate looked at me and smiled. I knew that smile as if it were happening via my own lips. She had heard all of this before. The reason she is my best friend is because she will listen to it all over and over again.
“You know what they say. If you…”
“Oh I know!” I couldn’t help but snap at her. “If you love someone set them free.” After I said the words I knew it would take me hours to get the Sting song out of my head. Or was it the Police? Then I realized it didn’t really matter.
Kate was there the night I met Jen. She may have seen me fall for her before I even knew what hit me. It took me two years before I was able to admit my feelings, and on the first day of the third year it was too late. Jen brought her new girlfriend to a party. It was on that night that I got drunk enough to tell her I loved her. It was on that night that she slapped me in the face, cried, and told me I was too late.
Ok, so I know this isn’t a lot to go on, but I would just like to know if it flows well. I’m really trying to work on my dialog and any tips or suggestions would be wonderful. Once again I promise I won’t do this again. The next time you hear from me I’m sure it will be poetry or some sort of scandalous rant.
