Erotic Novel

Oct
2009

Hot:

I am in the process of writing an erotic novel and I wanted to get some feedback. The following is an excerpt from a very rough draft. If you would like to read more you can go to my blog at http://fashionistaonfiree22.blogspot.com/. Your thoughts are appreciated and as I said I I know it needs more work. Thanks,Amy

It was April in New York and the color was returning to the city in full force after a cold winter. Alyssa arrived for her 9:00AM interview fifteen minutes early smartly dressed in a navy blue interview suit. At five foot six 114 pounds her long slender legs seductively caressed by the stockings flowing into the confines of the knee length skirt that she wore. Her long blonde hair was in a classic up-do showing off the pearl necklace she wore as it rode the slender curves of her neck. A broach of green jade magnified the color of her eyes. I walked out of my office to find her anxiously waiting her resume nervously gripped in her hands and I was instantly attracted to her innocence and soft angelic features. I asked her to have a seat in one of the two chairs positioned in front of my desk and began by asking her “So tell me abut yourself and why you think you’re qualified for this position.” I could see the excitement in her eyes as she spoke of her days attending college at a prestigious women’s college and her home in a small New England town. Her perfect breasts swayed in unison underneath her tight silk blouse as she tried to draw attention away from her lack of experience with an overabundance of enthusiasm. It was all I could do to keep my mind from wandering to thoughts of her naked body sprawled across my bed and several times I swear her eyes pleaded for the same scenario. As we finished she rose to shake my hand and whether by accident or design her skirt rose slightly to reveal the top portion of her stockings secured snugly by the garters as they rested tightly against her waist. At that point I knew then the “hook” was in me and I was willing to sacrifice whatever it took to have her.